This is such a strong revenge-meets-second-chance hook! The guitar already carries so much emotional weight, and the fact that she manages to get it back after ten years makes you immediately want to know what happens next. The ending with the buyer’s condition is a great cliffhanger too—“on the condition that I join him on his front…” makes you NEED the next part. 🎸👀
I’d definitely keep reading.
Anonymous3 days ago▲ 2
My god that must be painful. The toxicity is horrible. The audacity of selling your belongings is next level. I am glad that you are no longer with such a horrible person. I hope you find peace.
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Back to the entryThis is such a strong revenge-meets-second-chance hook! The guitar already carries so much emotional weight, and the fact that she manages to get it back after ten years makes you immediately want to know what happens next. The ending with the buyer’s condition is a great cliffhanger too—“on the condition that I join him on his front…” makes you NEED the next part. 🎸👀 I’d definitely keep reading.
My god that must be painful. The toxicity is horrible. The audacity of selling your belongings is next level. I am glad that you are no longer with such a horrible person. I hope you find peace.
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